Thanks very much and I do know this! I am an aspiring actress myself and I am well aware of the audition process and facing the hardships but this is a totally fantasy story! However, I appreciate the constructive criticism! I know Shannen has other friends too but i didn't want to write them into my story. It just happened the way that it happened, i didn't really think about that. I had a lot to deal with with all the characters and that is why I wrote them out!
Thanks for the suggestions though, I will try to write my next few stories a little better for you.
-Linds