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Postby thefifthsister » Wed Mar 26, 2008 3:23 pm

Hey so I got a bit of my next song written. This is gonna be so hard to remember the words too Image

So I tried to write a song
But the message was so damn wrong
I went back to the start
And wrote what was in my heart

But it was no use
The message wasn't coming through
I have to say it the right way
For it to matter what I say

It is a hard task
And of you I ask
To keep an open mind
And give me a little time


Then I think I'll add some vocalisation.... oh's and la's Image
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Song writing help!

Postby thefifthsister » Wed Mar 26, 2008 3:45 pm

That's good!

And I noticed that the discussion had come back round to the initial topic again Image

The Song song

So I tried to write a song
But the message was so damn wrong
I went back to the start
And wrote what was in my heart

But it was no use
The message wasn't coming through
I have to say it the right way
For it to matter what I say

There's a lot to consider
But I'm no quitter
There's a lot to do
For it to matter to you
The guitar needs some work
And the drums have a quirk
I don't like how the rhythm flows
And I can't remember how the next bit goes

It is a hard task
And of you I ask
To keep an open mind
And give me a little time

Make of it what you will
But to me it's just another thrill
To share my thoughts with you
And my feelings too

There's a lot to consider
But I'm no quitter
There's a lot to do
For it to matter to you
The guitar needs some work
And the drums have a quirk
I don't like how the rhythm flows
And I can't remember how the next bit goes

There's a lot to consider
But I'm no quitter
There's a lot to do
For it to matter to you
The guitar needs some work
And the drums have a quirk
I don't like how the rhythm flows
And I can't remember how the next bit goes
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Song writing help!

Postby littlemissbad » Wed Mar 26, 2008 5:56 pm

TheFifthSister wrote:Anyone have some inspiration for me? I got a few guitar parts written but need something to write about.

Seeing as my music is "nerd rock" I'm gonna write a song about Charmed!


ummmmm not to sound like totally dull here........ but what the hell is nerd rock lol xoxoxo Image
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Postby thefifthsister » Wed Mar 26, 2008 6:05 pm

Not many people know.

It's pop-punk music (Blink 182, Sum 41) that seems to be about nerdy topics or the bands dress nerdy. Think Weezer, if you know who they are.

Considering I wrote a song about meeting Shannen and another about Charmed it would fit.

*hugs*

xoxoxo Image
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Postby littlemissbad » Wed Mar 26, 2008 6:17 pm

TheFifthSister wrote:Not many people know.

It's pop-punk music (Blink 182, Sum 41) that seems to be about nerdy topics or the bands dress nerdy. Think Weezer, if you know who they are.

Considering I wrote a song about meeting Shannen and another about Charmed it would fit.

*hugs*

xoxoxo Image


i think thats really cool i do anyway xoxoxo Image
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Postby alessandraminetti » Fri Mar 28, 2008 1:46 pm

xP Thanks..
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Postby thefifthsister » Sat Apr 12, 2008 5:24 pm

So I can't think of anything that rimes with warmth Image

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Postby thefifthsister » Sat Apr 12, 2008 5:39 pm

Haha I changed the line anyway Image

You're right, worth isn't that close either Image
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