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my new fan fic

Postby pocahontas » Thu Apr 19, 2012 10:25 pm

here's my new fan fic well it's the same one but i fixed it let me know if this is much better. :)

One day Piper and Phoebe and Pru decide to take a camping trip to try to get away from all the evil they had to fight to try at least have a normal life a normal vacation at least try too. They all agree that they all have to bring a date with them. Piper dared Pru to ask Andy n Pru dare Piper to ask Leo n then Pru n Piper dare Phoebe to bring Cole.
I dare you to bring Andy, Piper said to Pru,
Well I dare you to ask Leo, Pru said to Piper,
Ight I will, Piper said to Pru,
I will ask Andy too, Pru said to Piper,
Who am I suppose to ask? asked Phoebe,
Piper and Pru looked at eachother to come up with an idea.
Well why not ask Cole, said Piper,
Yeah ask Cole said Pru,
We dare you said Piper and Pru,
Ight your on said Phoebe,
While they start to pack for the trip Phoebe had a question to ask Pru and Piper.
You guys are you sure we can go on this vacation? I mean with all these warlocks after us trying to get our powers should we even be leaving the house for a vacation? asked Phoebe,
then Piper said it's just for the weekend Phoebe for a few days, I think we can enjoy at least one vacation with or without the warlocks, I think we can pull this off,
Yeah Phoebe we have to at least try to live some sort of a normal life rather we're witches or not said Pru,
You guys are right we have to at least try said Phoebe,
So Phoebe went back to her room to finish packing for the trip and to think of how to ask Cole to go with her on the trip. Meanwhile Piper was thinking of how to ask Leo and Pru was thinking of how to ask Andy to go with them on the trip. They were also thinking if they would go with them on the trip. They were all worried about if the warlocks would try to ruin the trip in some way but they all hope it wouldn't come to that. If it did then Andy would know that they have powers and Pru doesn't want Andy to find out that way she wants to tell him in her own way and at the right time.


let me know if i fixed it n if this is much better n i'm gonna fix my other ones n make somemore but in the meantime let me know if this is much better n thank you :)
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Re: my new fan fic

Postby pocahontas » Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:15 pm

Meanwhile Phoebe almost finish packing and since she was almost finish she decided to take a break to call Cole to ask him if he can come on the camping trip with them and while Phoebe calls Cole. Meanwhile Piper was yelling for Leo and then he came down and the sisters already knew about Leo being a white lighter the only person that doesn't know about them or Leo was Andy except for Cole but the sisters n Leo doesn't know about Cole at least not yet,
Hey said Leo what's up? he asked,
I was wondering if you like to come on the camping trip with me and my sisters said Piper,
What about the warlocks and all the evil that's after you guys and the book of shadows Piper? asked Leo,
We have to at least try to live a normal life n try to have a vacation Leo, besides it's just a few days just for the weekend and if we have too then we'll just hide the books of shadows or least take it with us said Piper, so what do u say? she asked,
Ight we can try , i'll go anywhere with you said Leo,
Piper was happy that Leo agree to come with them on the camping trip. Meantime Pru was on her cell calling Andy and trying to get a hold of him and while she was trying to get a hold of him Phoebe was busy talking to Cole trying to get him to come with them,
I don't know about going on this trip with you said Cole,
C'mon Cole it's just for the weekend just a few days said Phoebe,
What Phoebe n her sisters don't know is that Cole is a demon and he's trying everything to advoid them finding out but at the sametime he's hoping they do find out cause he thought they could help him cause he doesn't want to hurt them especially since he couldn't help but fall in love with Phoebe,
So will u come on this trip with us Cole please? asked Phoebe,
Ight i'll come cause i love you and i wanna be with you said Cole,
i love you too said Phoebe,
Meanwhile Pru finally got a hold of Andy,
Hey Andy said Pru,
Hey Pru what's up? asked Andy,
We're planning a camping trip for the weekend for a few days Will you come with us on this trip? asked Pru,
yeah i will who's all going? asked Andy,
Well there's us and then Piper and Leo and Phoebe and Cole said Pru,
So is this a triple date thing? asked Andy,
Yeah it is said Pru,
What time should i be there? asked Andy,
We're leaving right after lunch so around 2pm said Pru,
I'll be there said Andy,
See you soon said Pru,
Then when she got off the phone she went to tell Piper and Phoebe that Andy agree to come with them on the camping trip so they went back to finish packing and then they started loading up the van and then when they were finish they went back inside to have some lunch before Cole and Andy shows up to go with them. Meanwhile back at Cole's place he was fighting off every demon that came at him and the source sent every demon he could think off to bring Cole to him so they could kill him for betraying them. Meanwhile back at the manor the girls just have finish their lunch when there was a knock at the door,
Why don't you go answer the door Pru i'll finish cleaning up said Piper,
i'll help you said Phoebe to Piper,
So Pru went to answer the door to see who it was, While Piper n Phoebe finish taking the dishes to the kitchen.
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Re: my new fan fic

Postby pocahontas » Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:27 pm

When Pru answered the door it was Andy he showed up 5 minutes early cause he didn't wanna show up late. Meanwhile in the kitchen Phoebe was helping Piper clean up when Leo appeared in the kitchen,
I'm all ready to go said Leo,
We will be ready once me and Phoebe finish cleaning up cause wanna do it now so won't have to worry about it when we get back said Piper,
I wonder what's taking Cole so long to get here i'm worried said Phobe,
He'll be here soon we still got time before we leave said Piper,
Meanwhile back at Cole's place he's still fighting every demon that came at him,
Might as well give up i'll still beat every single one of you if it's the last thing i do said Cole,
Meanwhile back at the manor Pru was in the living room talking to Andy while Piper and Phobe was in the kitchen finishing cleaning and Leo decided to help them along so could get it done faster and get it done so by the time Cole shows up they can leave to go on their camping trip. Meanwhile back at Cole's place he had just finished slaying the last demon and when nomore showed up for a while he decided to get ready and when he was finish getting ready he left to go to the manor to meet up with Phoebe and everyone to go on the camping trip and he called Phoebe from his cell to finally tell her that he was on his way. Meanwhile back at the manor Phoebe just had gotten off the phone with Cole and after she told Leo and Piper that he was on his way she went to tell Pru and Andy that he was on his way and that when he gets here that they can all finally leave to go on their camping trip.
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Re: my new fan fic

Postby pocahontas » Thu Apr 26, 2012 9:04 pm

Meanwhile 10 minutes later they heard a knock at the door and phoebe answered the door and there standing at the door was Cole and now that Cole showed up they can all finally leave to go on the camping trip. While the sisters checked all threw the house to make sure nothing was left on n that everything was locked Andy and Leo and Cole went to load everything into the van and while the guys were loading the van Cole had this worried look on his face,
You ight Cole? asked Leo,
Yeah are u ight Cole? asked Andy,
Yeah I'm fine, why u guys ask me that? asked Cole,
Cause u have this worry look on your face said Leo,
Yeah u look like your worried about something Cole said Andy,
I'm fine i'm not worried about anything not yet anyway said Cole,
what do u mean by that? asked Leo and Andy at the sametime,
nothing it's nothing said Cole,
Ight said Leo and Andy at the sametime,
Meanwhile inside the manor the sisters just got done checking on everything in the house.
So we checked everything so are we all ready to go on this camping trip? asked Pru,
Yeah said Piper and Phoebe at the sametime,
So let's roll said Pru,
So the sisters locked the front door n everybody loaded into the van and they were on their way when Phoebe asked if they could stop at the nearest store to get something to drink for the road n they all agree to stop and get something to drink and they happen to stop at the store that a demon was at who was harressing the cashier but when they demon saw the sisters comming he hid in the back n told the cashier to pretend nothing was going on till they left or that cashier was gonna get it n the cashier agree. Andy and Pru and Piper and Leo and Phoebe and Cole all walked into the store to look around n to pick what they want to drink and they were looking around not knowing that something was going on before they got there.
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Re: my new fan fic

Postby pocahontas » Wed May 16, 2012 3:51 am

Meanwhile 5 minutes later the sisters walked into the store and the cashier was going on as always pretending that nothing was going on in the store and the demon was hiding behind the counter hiding from the sisters. When the demon took a sneak peek to see what the sisters were doing and wondering why they were there in the first place he noticed that Cole was with them and he's the one the source told all the demons to go after him n bring Cole to him and if he refuse for them to destroy him and the demon decided to forget about the cashier and he decided to take off and sneak into the sisters van to follow them and when he find the right time that he will go after Cole. While the sisters look around the store and decide if there is anything else they want besides getting the drinks the demon snuck out the backdoor and he snuck around the store and into the back of the sister's van. After the sisters and Leo and Cole and Andy got everything they want they went to pay for there stuff not knowing that a demon was out in their van waiting to attack Cole when they least expect it. When the cashier was talking to them he had a chance to tell them that the demon was in their van but he didn't he thought that if he did the demon would come back and destroy him for telling them about him and what he was up too.
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Re: my new fan fic

Postby pocahontas » Mon Dec 09, 2013 10:25 pm

sorry haven't posted in a while but i'm back n my babygirl chloe is 9 months old now n will be 10 months old on the 12th of this month she been sick with a bad cold n 2 ear infections but she's all better now but now i caught a cold/flu n my hubby caught a little cold. but i'm back n i will post more of my fan fics as soon as i think of what happens next i have alot of idea's all popping in my head at once just trying to strighten them out lol but as soon as i figure what happens next in my fan fic i will post it. i'm writting it now as we speak :D
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