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Brainwashed

Postby malou » Sat Aug 14, 2004 2:18 pm

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Postby malou » Sat Aug 14, 2004 2:19 pm

Back in Mikes house:

Phoebe and Mike are sitting on the couch kissing. But Phoebe doesn’t fell the same passion from Mike, as she did the night before.
“ Mike, is there something you want to tell me?” Phoebe asks.
“No, what do you mean?”
“You just seem so… I don’t know… different.”
“Well… I don’t feel different.”
“Okay then” Phoebe wasn’t quite convinced.
“I have to go out and powder my nose.”
“Okay, I’ll wait here.”
Phoebe finds her way to the toilet. As soon as she cloth the door she wishers, “Leo! Leo!”
Leo orbs down right beside her.
“Phoebe? What is it?”
“Sysh! Mike is in the other room”
“Sorry” Leo wipers, “so, whats up?”
“Mike is acting really weird. I don’t know who he is anymore. I think something is wrong with him.”
“Okay…. But what do you want me to do about it?”
“I don’t know! He act like he is brainwashed or something… Just keep an eye on him, okay?”
Yeah sure”
“Thanks Leo”
Leo is just about to orb out, when Phoebe stops him, “Leo wait!”
“What?”
“Tell Piper and Prue, that I’m okay, and not to worry, okay?”
“Sure” And then he is gone.
Phoebe walks back into the room where Mike is.
“So you missed me?” she asks.
“I guess…”
“Hmm…” Phoebe is worried.
“Come sit down” Mike says.
Phoebe sits down beside him. He raises the knife, and Phoebe scream.
“What are you doing?!”
“Killing you witch!!”
“Mike I beg you, don’t!”
“To late Phoebe.” And then he stabs her in the chest.
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Postby malou » Sat Aug 14, 2004 4:42 pm

Back at the Manor:

Piper and Prue are sitting on the couch, watching TV, when Leo orbs in.
“Hi honey!” Pipers say and get up.
“Hi!” Leo says with a smile.
They kiss.
Prue are still sitting on the couch, “you guys are so cute together!”
“So are you and Andy honey” Piper says.
“Hi, I’m home!” Andy just walked in.
Prue stands up, and runs out to her husband, “Hi baby” she says and gives him a big kiss.
“Hi!” Didn’t know you had missed me that much!
“Oh, don’t be silly! I love you!” Prue looks right in to Andys dark eyes.
“I know honey, I love you too”
“See you guys are really cute too” Piper says and looks at Prue and smiles.
“ARW!” Leo says, and falls to the floor.
Piper runs to him “Honey, what’s wrong?!”
Prue and Andy let go of each other, and run over to Piper and Leo.
“It’s Phoebe, she is hurt… badly!” Leo says in pain.
“Oh my God, I knew it!” Piper looks at Prue.
“Leo get up, you have to orb us to her!” Prue says in panic.
Leo stands up, and they all join hands.
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Postby malou » Sat Aug 14, 2004 4:45 pm

Back in Mikes house:

“M-Mike… why are you doing this?” Phoebe says quietly.
“Because… they told me too” Mike says, knowing that if he tell Phoebe who is behind all of it, he will get killed.
“Who did?... Mike please!” Phoebe is lying on the floor, bleeding.
Suddenly Mike sees a white light. Leo, Piper, Prue and Andy show up.
“Just what I have been waiting for” Mike says… “Now I can kill Phoebe.”
“No!” Piper screams, as Mike takes the knife and stabs Phoebe again. This time she died.
Prue and Piper run to Phoebes dead body, while Leo and Andy tries to hole Mike back.
“No! Prue! She is gone!!” Piper is checking Phoebes pulse.
“This can’t be happening!” Prue bend over Phoebe and hold her hand. Tears are streaming down Prues face.
“What have you done?!” Piper looks at Mike, her eyes are full with anger and pain, “You have killed my baby sister you monster!” Piper gets up, and runs towards Mike.
“Piper no!” Prue lets go of Phoebes hand and tries to hold Piper back.
“Prue! Let me go! We can’t let him get away with this!” Piper is now crying, she is trying to blow Mike up. But it doesn’t work.
“Why are my powers no working?!” Piper screams, “I will not let him get away with this!”
“I know, Piper I know” Prue don’t know what to do, so she just holds Piper. Piper looks at Phoebe and is now sobbing very hard.
Prue tries to be strong but can’t hold her tears back.
In the mean time, Leo and Andy are still fighting with Mike.

“How could you do this?!” Leo jells, “How could you hurt Phoebe?”
“And her sisters?!” Andy adds, “I will not let you get away with this!”
Mike tries to run, but Leo grabs him by the arm, and orbs him to the Manor.
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Postby monstervsangels » Sun Aug 15, 2004 5:59 pm

When is the next installment, very good english for your second language Image
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Brainwashed

Postby malou » Sun Aug 15, 2004 7:18 pm

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Postby linnfromnorway » Mon Aug 16, 2004 9:04 pm

Very very good! Cant waint for more! Image
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Brainwashed

Postby malou » Wed Aug 18, 2004 1:18 pm

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Postby malou » Wed Aug 18, 2004 3:08 pm

Here are some more...


Leo has just knocked Mike out, who is lying on the floor.
“We have to get back to the girls!” Andy says.
“I know, but what shall we do with him?” Leo says and point is finger at Mike.
“I don’t know… but we really need to get back! Piper and Prue needs us, more than ever… and Phoebe.” Andys eyes start to fill with water, “Can’t we just tie him up or something?”
“Yeah, okay… lets do that.” Leo says and starts walking towards Mike.
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Postby malou » Wed Aug 18, 2004 3:11 pm

Back at Mikes house

Phoebe is lying on the floor… dead. Prue is sitting beside her, holding her hand and sobbing very hard.
Piper she is just sitting beside Phoebe, looking at her baby sister. Tears are streaming down Pipers face. Non-stop. Suddenly Piper starts giving Phoebe CPR.
“Piper what are you doing?” Prue asks.
“What does it looks like I’m doing, Prue? Come on, help me!”
Prue looks at Piper with an empty look in her eyes, “It’s too late Piper, there is nothing we can do…”
But Piper ignores her, and just continues giving Phoebe CPR.
“Piper, stop it! It’s too late! Piper?!” Prue tries to grab Pipers arm.
“Shut up Prue! Just shut up…” Piper pools her arm to her, and continues.
“Piper, please!” Prue don’t know what to do.
“Help me Prue!”
“No! It’s no use!” Prue is getting desperate.
“Prue! For Gods sake! Help me!! This is our baby sister lying dead on the floor!” Piper wipes her forehead. Her hands are full with blood.
“Piper… Please!” Prue is starting to cry even harder.
Piper falls down on the floor, and cry very loud.
“Why Prue? Why Phoebe?!”
“I don’t know honey… I don’t know” Prue sit beside Piper and hold her.
They sit there for a long time, just crying and holding each other.

Suddenly Leo and Andy orbs in.
Leo runs over to Piper, and Andy runs over to Prue.
“Oh honey!” Leo says.
“Leo heal her!” Piper says and pulls away form Prue.
“I can’t honey, you know that”
“Just try!” Piper jells.
“Okay, I will try”
Prue and Andy are sitting holding each other. Prue looks at Phoebe’s body, as Leo tries to heal her. But it doesn’t work.
“Damn it!” Piper says.
Prue start to cry again. Andy takes her in his arms.
“God! I can’t take this!” Pipers takes her hands up, and cover her head. Her hands are still full with blood.
“We have to do something, Andy!” Prue says.
“I know honey, but what?”
“I don’t know, but we have to get our self together.” Prue says, and looks over at the devastated Piper.
“Come on, lets orb Piper back to the Manor” Leo says, and looks at Piper.
“Where is Mike?” Piper looks at Leo.
“He is at the Manor” Andy answers.
“In the Manor? In our house?! He is not allowed to be near our house!!” Piper jells.
“He is tied to a chair, if that helps. And maybe we can use him for something…” Leo says carefully, “After all, he is the one who… Yeah you know what I mean.”
“Ok, lets get home so I can kick his ass!! But I will not leave Phoebe here!!” Piper says angry.
“No no, we will take her with us” Prue says.
“I can take her.” Andy says, and walks against Phoebe, and lift her up.
Piper and Prue look at Phoebe, lying there dead in Andy’s arms.
“I can’t take this!” Prue says, and start to cry again.
“I know Prue, but we have to, for Phoebes sake. We will safe her! No matter what, there has to be a way!” Piper says, and takes Prues hand, “Come on sweetie”
Leo takes Pipers hand, and lay his hand on Andy’s shoulder, and Piper and Prue are holding hands. And then they all orb out.
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